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I'm using Paint again

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It looks...uh....quite good?
Compare to what I drew years ago...yeah...that's better...^^;
So...uh....what do you think? What do I need to improve?
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This is a really pretty piece of work!  the style is very lovely! 

I feel like the light source of the background should be experimented with.... like the background has 3 shades from that main color of peach-salmon color, and I was thing maybe you could have gone with more tints and lightened up a little more? 
Like You see how you have it the peach-salmon color for the majority of the background, then towards the bottom is goes to pink, the a darker pink and a dark red-salmon color? Well maybe you could have done a little lighting for the top part of the background of the picture? Like highlights. 
Like It would go from peach-salmon to a light orange-pink then to a white-tan? 
Just an idea >w<'' 
Also the hair that curls around the ear that reveals the closed eye should be a little heavier so it should did down a bit near the side-burn place next to the ear... I have long hair and I study it a lot for my own hair styles I use for my characters so I can get a sense of how hair works xD 
also the collar-neck bones should maybe be a little pointier at the tips when they get close to each other at the center because of the little bone point that pops up there. 
Also the little drip streams that are coming off the upper chest look a little off centered a bit. Liquid falls straight down without wind, and it looks like its being pushed apart from itself probably for the up-down-up-down effect you had gone for there, but they look like fingers in a way instead of liquid streams. It would be a great help to watch slow-motions of liquid in videos! 
like looks at these gifs : 
www.netanimations.net/black-an…
24.media.tumblr.com/e7b7907029…
if you pay close attention to the water streams and the way water tends to bounce it could greatly increase your texture abilities in art too! :3 

otherwise this is very nice, I love the little hair curl at the top, the shading over the eye from the hair adds a nice tough because of the style, and its an interesting conceptual picture! 
Well done!! : D